Essay writing

The test came and last week we spend three classes preparing the drafts and the final essay of the first part of  "To Kill a Mockingbird". I believe I did an excelent job, and just grammar discounted me, so I've got a 6.7, that's not bad.

My tesis was "The characters of To Kill a Mockingbird become alienated when they protect their beliefs, as Scout, Atticus and Boo Radley". So I proved they showed how society discriminated them because they were different, as Scout wasn't the stereotype of a lady, Boo was discriminated product of ignorance and isolation, and Atticus when defending a negro at the court. I think the topic was very clear and I developed my ideas very clearly, though I need to improve my style when writting. (the only comment)